Well loyal reader, I had to go in and re-write parts of
Loyal reader, do you think it is so wrong - I just couldn't live with the senamensing line - it was too clunky. I try to use senamensing whenever I can since I invented the word and want to get credit in some future edition of Webster's, but I had to face up to it - it just wasn't working. The changes make the poem flow much better.
